by Nathaniel Weissman
(Ewa Beach, HI, USA)
I'm actually looking for advice on this piece, mainly as you can see, the over-darkened (muddy) canyon and also the background trees to the right including the land. I'm especially having trouble moving the water in the fall for it seems to just lamely flatten down the hill.
I would like for it to have a more powerful outlook as it descends from the top. All advise is greatly appreciated!! Also, I would like to lift the mudd from the walls as much as possible without hurting the greenery and tree on the left. Is this possible?