haley

by sheila lashley
(greenville,ms.)

sweet thirteen

sweet thirteen

I drew this picture for my granddaughter.I wanted her to have something special from her Nanna.Idrew it on smooth Bristol paper and used pencil and charcoal.I have only been drawing for about a month and I have had to work hard and practice a lot to make the mouths look right on my drawings.


I think I have come really close to making them right,but I know I can still do better. The shading has to be just right or nothing works.When going by a photo you have to look close to get every little detail drawn in.I learned that even if you think it doesn't matter,it does.Please let me know where i can do better.Thanks

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Five stars! Great job!
by: jennifer

You asked for some constructive critisism, what you could do to improve the picture? The drawing is absolutly perfect, the only way I can see for it to be improved is to make it stand out and demand to be noticed by simply bringing it forward with a dark back ground. I enjoyed your work very much, thank you for sharing!

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Five stars! Great job!
by: jennifer

You asked for some constructive critisism, what you could do to improve the picture? The drawing is absolutly perfect, the only way I can see for it to be improved is to make it stand out and demand to be noticed by simply bringing it forward with a dark back ground. I enjoyed your work very much, thank you for sharing!

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Five stars! Great job!
by: jennifer

You asked for some constructive critisism, what you could do to improve the picture? The drawing is absolutly perfect, the only way I can see for it to be improved is to make it stand out and demand to be noticed by simply bringing it forward with a dark back ground. I enjoyed your work very much, thank you for sharing!

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WHAT A STAR
by: LINDA

Sheila

if your grandaughter is a lovely young lady with a gentle disposition then you have caught her true likeness. This is a lovely piece of work. The detail is enough. The hair is lovely and the eyes and sweet smile create a beautiful masterpiece. Be Proud!

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haley
by: betty

she is lovely. well done

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