DEAD HEART

by OWEN JONES
(australia)

FIRST ABSTRACT

FIRST ABSTRACT

HI EVERYBODY,WELL I THOUGHT I WOULD GIVE ABSTRACT AGO,THIS WAS DONE ON 190 GMS PAPER,SIZE 29.27X 27.00 CM.I HAVE HAD THIS PICTURE IN MY MIND FOR SOME TIME,THE DEAD HEART OF CENTRAL AUSTRALIA.ILL BE HONEST I DONT NO IF I LIKE IT OR NOT.I WOULD BE INTERESTED TO HEAR FROM OTHERS.CHEERS OWEN JONES.

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I like it
by: Jill

Its definitely different. Nice use of red in it.

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Cool
by: Bev Ontario Canada

I do like it, different, I know what you mean sometimes I do a horrid painting and other people really like it, so it must be true Art is in the eye of the beholder Happy painting

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first abstract
by: Angeline, the Netherlands

Hi Owen,

I don't think it looks terrible.
My advice is, if you want to make it abstract, to remove the grey lines of the trees(?) in the red part.
Then it will be more abstract.
Keep trying!

Angeline



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the rule of thirds
by: cindy

Maybe the rule of thirds doesn't apply to abstract, but the half n half look is unappealing. i do like the barren look of this however.

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I Hate It
by: OWEN JONES

It looks terrible, take it off Bob. Cheers Owen.

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